Extremely talented, this does not sound like your first recorded track, you have skill and did an excellent job. The real output of your power seems to come mid song, keep at it and you will go far in this business.

(1 year ago)

Def hot some sick word play with some comedy punch lines and a different rhyme structure keep rhymin PEACE --ABSTRUSE--

(1 year ago)

Thats pretty raw, especially for your first track. Its got my vote fo sho! Return some of that love if u feel so inclined homie,peace!

(1 year ago)

U GOT SOME GOOD WORDPLAY N FLOW. JUST WORK ON BREATH CONTROL AND TAKE ADVANTAGE OF ALL THESE COMPUTER PROGRAMS OUT HERE 2 USE TRACKS INSTEAD OF DOIN ONE TAKES. U'LL HEAR A BIG DIFFERENCE. BIG UP 2 DA TDOT.

(1 year ago)

shot out for keeping it real on the wus with the throw back to real hip hop with the beat box 533 MoonShine..

(1 year ago)

Yup!...datz dat shit kicko...stay tuned

(1 year ago)

You got my vote fam keep doing ya thing

(1 year ago)

We see ya fam, keep on the grind! AF

(1 year ago)

Keep doing ur thing. like the lyrics. got my vote. stay up

(1 year ago)

WHAT'S GOODZZ SUN SENT YOU A VOTE

(1 year ago)

Harsh Z, showin tha local love homie, can't wait for the WUS video to pop off, CYPHA BLOCK!

(1 year ago)

great man....

(1 year ago)

ur happy man...im voting now...juss guess who it is

(1 year ago)

good for ya 1st song homey

(1 year ago)

thanks harshZ, music is bangin, you know you got my vote...

(1 year ago)

keep it up...like the tone of the voice...

(1 year ago)

U got my vote!!!!

(1 year ago)

you showed out boy.....keep it up.

(1 year ago)

vote#516! it's a good job 4 a 1st recording! don't give up the work! keep it real!

(1 year ago)

515# support return !! strictly hip hop track!

(1 year ago)

voted, keep on the grind man.

(1 year ago)

Hey for being your first recorded song it's not bad, i hope you do well in this competition. Don't forget to check me out i'm competing also. ANYONE WHO WANTS TO COLLAB JUST LET ME KNOW!

(1 year ago)

U NICE HARSHZ,U REPPIN THE T-DOT SPITIN THAT FLAME KEEP DOIN THAT

(1 year ago)

YOU ARE A BEAST..lol i am Pearls oldest son, check her pix..MY MOM and justalyricist said you was solid so just for that you got my vote..GET ACTIVE **PRINCE JAY**

(1 year ago)

Keep it up youngin you got some work still to do on your flow but snice you hit me up I voted for you B easy

(1 year ago)

#503 hot track return the love peace!!

(1 year ago)

like your music sent you a vote

(1 year ago)

dropped you a vote keep it up!!

(1 year ago)

official!

(1 year ago)

Good looking for the support I appreciate it you got my vote too 1

(1 year ago)

I support those folk who are real so there it is I voted

(1 year ago)

I got on here to support justa but he hit me and asked me to vote for you as well glad I did you keep on keeping on and work on them verses baby

(1 year ago)

I see you as a new up and coming heres my vote keep working at it. 100

(1 year ago)

you got my vote man,like your work don't forget to stop by i nedd your support too peace

(1 year ago)

mad skillz, you got my vote, you already know.

(1 year ago)

Yo ur shit sounds pretty good my dude. I just voted. dont 4get to return the favor. peace.

(1 year ago)

no matter what anyone tells you, never stop believe'n in urself - good luck and safe journeys.

(1 year ago)

alread on it fam i was told about you a few days ago heres my vote good shit

(1 year ago)

that kid justa rep your name today from the stage heres a vote to help you out.

(1 year ago)

I was at the justalricist show and he told everybody to join this site and check a few people out on here. you were one of the mc's he said to check out so I did and I voted for you as well. take care and if you know justalyricist tell him I want him really bad ok

(1 year ago)

All good love good luck make sure you let justalyricist know that his new friends out here is spreading the love to those he spoke of..

(1 year ago)

Thats right / Keep it tight / Gone and do the damn thang / U gone smash em everytime / No matter what they brang!!! Good luck wit it boss! -Q

(1 year ago)

Thx for the vote man keep doin what u do

(1 year ago)

my vote is in babe

(1 year ago)

hot track guy you go and good luck

(1 year ago)

Nice voice, decent delivery, nice lyrics but try to slow down and enunciate. Check me out also on "Whateva it may be" Peace

(1 year ago)

here you go sweetheart

(1 year ago)

pretty good....not bad....i'm sure with more practice and dedication you'll get much better...

(1 year ago)

peace kid. i know u lookin for real emcee's with lyrics. here's #448. do me a solid and check my 100k "Listen, Rewind". an addition to ya top 10...REAL HIPHOP

(1 year ago)

u got my vote homie keep doin ya thing

(1 year ago)

voted

(1 year ago)

Good Lookin out Homeeeeebwwwwooooooy! I was tryna vote again for u but they said I already voted?

(1 year ago)

In response to ur Email? Hot Shit! Mark up Trippl 4'z (444) on mine... Check me out and shoot back that Support... Much Resepect! DollaSign H

(1 year ago)

you got my vote lets get you in the top ten i like this song, your name was passed by justalyricist at the DUBBS show in San Jose festival

(1 year ago)

i got my vote in

(1 year ago)

Good Work HarshZ. Keep doin' you, 440 on me.

(1 year ago)

yo dis track be da shit homie! like da dude said down belo...down feel so negative bout yo self it don't matter how many people hate it or like it....all u needs to kno is if it sounds good to you den it "is" good aight! well you got my vote fo sho! homie n good luck!

(1 year ago)

Don't go putting yourself down and accept your talent. For a first track and I have to tell you I never listened to rap or hip hop till my son cut his first two songs and I have to say your on the right track so keep up the good work. Stop leaving negative about yourself and just go with it and see it. Sounds good.

(1 year ago)

No one cares how or why you did it the fack is that you did it and it sounds great stay up black man you got my vote

(1 year ago)

sounds good.

(1 year ago)

poped u a vote mane, you better winthis. RANDOMFACE.

(1 year ago)

I meet justalyricist at the DUBBS show and he sent me your way

(1 year ago)

keep rocking out cock out...the recording industry isn't hip-hop and hip-hop isn't the recording industry...keep spitting and the negligible sh!t will follow... -oNe- SiNiK

(1 year ago)

Your the shit dude..vote is in

(1 year ago)

you got my vote i heard about you, kronic, murdoc, and shots from justalyricist at the DUBBS show this past weekend so im giving the love i promised. its all goood fam

(1 year ago)

THought i already voted. keep doin ya thing god

(1 year ago)

SUP GOOD LOOKEN ON DA COMMENT, DROPPED U A VOTE, GOOD SHIT FOR YOUR 1ST RECORDING SOUNDS GOOD. PEEP MY 100K TRAK AND DROP ME A VOTE, COMMENT ALL OF DAT. PEACE DEVOTIION

(1 year ago)

#416

(1 year ago)

Nice worx lord 415 my way aight...stay bizzy in da booth son

(1 year ago)

you got my vote i recieved a flyer from justalyricist he recommended you and a few others so here is my vote

(1 year ago)

got my vote :D

(1 year ago)

The production needs a little help other than that it is dope good job you got my vote.

(1 year ago)

U got my vote Bro 2 thumbs up. I dig u'r music n u have a nice flo. Keep on doin u'r thang.....peace Shawn T.

(1 year ago)

Already Voted Just getting another dose of this 1.

(1 year ago)

u good boo! got my vote! <3

(1 year ago)

Got my vote. VERY NICE!!!!!!!! Please vote my homeboy TY LANSKY! He did ova the THX Beat 2! His banga is called "Love Is". Peace.

(1 year ago)

good music your good. you got my vote

(1 year ago)

great track your very talented. good luck to you man

(1 year ago)

I LIKE YA STYLEZ... #404 ON US... PEEP OUR 100K ENTRY I PROMISE U WONT BE DISAPPOINTED...THANX..

(1 year ago)

I got a flyer from justalyricist and he told me to stop by and check a few of you out.

(1 year ago)

Work on it, bro. You got some thoughts, but you've got many steps ahead of you to become what you see in your mind. Continue. Get comfortable with your abilities. You telling us the sad story about the first session? We've all been there on some level, we know - just come with the real and do your best. You'll get there in time. They say in youth, we want so much in so little time - just go at your own pace.

(1 year ago)

you got my vote hot hot

(1 year ago)

I was told that you were pretty good and you are. good luck

(1 year ago)

nice!!!

(1 year ago)

vote number 393

(1 year ago)

voted 1

(1 year ago)

fa real yo, god job for the situation with no effects or nothin. heres vote #391

(1 year ago)

for real dog you got some raw talent. your wordplays cool. just polish the delivery up a little bit. sounds like you reading the paper a little to much, but over all for your first joint congrats shit is nice man

(1 year ago)

387 !!!WOO!!!

(1 year ago)

Just Poppin in to say, Hello and something is wrong with your player, it only plays for like 5 seconds, check it out ...

(1 year ago)

#386

(1 year ago)

tracks live got my vote check out my battle track b return the love 1

(1 year ago)

follow yo dream pimpn ..it's gonna happen stay @ it.. if It's in you it gonna come out my bru and shine ...

(1 year ago)

sounding good...keep it up....

(1 year ago)

yo man its aighht....on the real tho...never put a disclaimer before you throw a track out there. I never got to do this or whatever...It's ok. I think you need to work on your delivery a little bit some words are off beat a little, and switch up the hook. Just a critique. But overall ok. Keep grindin my dude for two years its ok...one hundred

(1 year ago)

HOTTER THAN FISH GREASE GRIMEY KEEP IT MOVIN PEACE. (GM) VOTE

(1 year ago)

YOOOOO this track is dope as hell man, im feelin this track man keep up the GREAT work. ~0nE~

(1 year ago)

Fosho!

(1 year ago)

ANUTHA VOTE HOMIE. SHOW SUM LUV BACK

(1 year ago)

You Got another 1 rite here. Keep it pushin. Look out for ya Boy and check me out. I'm a 100K contender but I'm a late entrie so I could really use the help. My track go I already know you gone like it. ...SONG. BALL OUT ...BEAT. EVEDINCE 1 ...KING-JAYDA

(1 year ago)

thats whats up da c.r.e.w

(1 year ago)

good shit youngin! just keep workin at it and it will all come together. what you put in determines what you get out. keep grindin. if you get a minute....check me out.

(1 year ago)

pretty nice for your first recording...got my vote hit me bak

(1 year ago)

damm!!! BraH u got MaDD FloWs I'm diggin that Beat Nice Work q-_-p

(1 year ago)

Ay bro u did good ya first time out. Like u said theres alot of work but u got homie. Keep doing u!

(1 year ago)

369's on Me. Like your Chinese Communism quote. I waited forty seconds because it's all about timing? I could of went "check one two uh uh check one two." Anyway, keep on working. It's not all fun and games. CANADA T.O represent. PEACE DASANE

(1 year ago)

I got u.. #366 -GM holla atcho boy

(1 year ago)

#365. Stay up

(1 year ago)

And dats wuts up.

(1 year ago)

Yeah i feel it

(1 year ago)

!!!!NICE MAN !!!!

(1 year ago)

nah im not messin wit the forums no more im focusing on the prize...

(1 year ago)

yea man im on the grind

(1 year ago)

realli feelin this!!!!! luv dat beat,FIRST RECORDED TRACK???? COULDA FOOLED ME!!!! only suggestion is be a lil mo' aggressive feel me? be on the look out fo ma shit,holla

(1 year ago)

I'll vote for you but your flow needs alot of work...keep doing ya thang!

(1 year ago)

not bad keep on keepin on

(1 year ago)

Damnn, yu iszz gd! lolsz ;)

(1 year ago)

i def voted...good lookin famo...keep doin the damn thing!

(1 year ago)

it s good if I can permit to give my opinion just a things put more effects melody in your flow more effects in your voice it s good for one shot to be continued kiss mx

(1 year ago)

Tight track homie. Keep it popping like Rice Crispies.

(1 year ago)

got ya bak ya digg!! #350 Check My Global Stats Nu MixTape Street Credibility We Want In Vol.1 Get @ Me www.myspace.com/sneake1mc Peace Sneake1

(1 year ago)

Dats Da Shit

(1 year ago)

I'm ur #348

(1 year ago)

Aight you doing it! 347

(1 year ago)

346. keep it lit

(1 year ago)

Yo homie vote numero 345 good shit thanks for tha love homie im goin all tha way tryin to catch up ima late entry hah buts its all good thanks for that ballohallic hit to homie keep tha support and keep it up real lyrical

(1 year ago)

Good stuff homie. Keep it up.

(1 year ago)

Keep raping and expressing yourself. I'll be hitting you up when I put out my new tracks. One.

(1 year ago)

#341 on us homie, good lookin out on the props son, keep doin it!!!!

(1 year ago)

Ay thats what good homie, Stay hongry and go get it, it damn sho aint gonna come to you- take every opportunity to get better. Stay up bro -be easy

(1 year ago)

BIG up Toronto... Keep doin ur thing homie my 100k's soon to come

(1 year ago)

This is classic!!!!

(1 year ago)

I voted 4 ya man check out my track for the 100k battle and let me know what u think. if you like it vote!

(1 year ago)

yezzzirrr

(1 year ago)

nice....

(1 year ago)

just voted. good luck

(1 year ago)

YO I AM FEELIN UR IISH.... YOU'VE ALREADY GOT MY VOTE EARLIER, THANKS FOR THE LOVE.... PEACE!!!!

(1 year ago)

good shot bro..keep bringin it. you def.got mine. peace. LW

(1 year ago)

good job you have my vote

(1 year ago)

You know if there's another Canadian Cat on here repping Hip Hop I gotta show love! Ferocious lyrics son! T-Dot yo!

(1 year ago)

this is dope. good for ur first song. pay no mind to haters, ive only been rappin for a year and i know exactly wat these ppl are jealous of... talent! hahaha got my vote

(1 year ago)

Yeah, I already voted 4 dis joint my dude!! Gud shit dats y I hollared atcha!!!

(1 year ago)

Yeah it has a good flow Vote#323 Check out my shit Baywatch and leave a comment and vote 4 me

(1 year ago)

Thanks for the love bruh stay at they neck

(1 year ago)

KEEP DOIN UR THING FUCK WHAT NE SAYS DO UR MUSIC 4 UR SELF DOG CHECK OUT MY SONG IVE BEEN RAPPIN 4 LIKE 12YEARS N MY FIRST CD IS ABOUT 2 COME OUT NEXT MONTH JUST DO UR THING I COULD USE THE VOTE

(1 year ago)

i'm feeling it for sure... keep doing what your doing

(1 year ago)

You've got something there...keep working hard to find your voice and keep writing/recording! And, most important, keep putting stuff up on Ursession to get feedback!

(1 year ago)

Dropped a vote,keep doin ya thang

(1 year ago)

Say i like where you goin at with that keep the tracks comin

(1 year ago)

I like it voted for ya

(1 year ago)

You show a lot of heart. Keep working on perfecting your craft. Congrats on your first track!

(1 year ago)

ok u put in work homie...dope

(1 year ago)

sounds good...Blessings LK

(1 year ago)

315 FOLKZ HOLLA BACK GOOD SHIT

(1 year ago)

It's koo. I think you should pronounce your words a little better but your energy and personality is there!

(1 year ago)

HarshZ, what up brother? I like it, wordplay n syllable phrasing is dope, I can't wait to hear more, cause you flow works nice, I felt at a couple of times your breathing left a few lines catching slightly. Coming from an Ozzies point of view, If i played this in my car or to the boys they'd rate it, Keep it coming fly kat, you def got skills brewing in you. Peace

(1 year ago)

nice beats u def got my vote

(1 year ago)

i kinda like it and i think once u find what your message really is then you'll find success..and im glad your're not trying to make a catchy song it shows u have heart.. good luck! {Isreal}

(1 year ago)

its dope homie keep it up sick flow homie

(1 year ago)

ok ok , im feelin tha beat, ur shit sounds on beat, i like ya flow..sounds tight. i also like tha hook,but ya u could add a double ta make it sound betta.. but yea overall its tight..im feelin it.. u should chek out ma tracks that i uploaded here.. im on tha first verse on all tha songs i put up.. tha hottest one in ma opinion is ma Southside track

(1 year ago)

Harshz, Young Hustler is sayin something. Spitin real game. Original is always better that a copy Kat. Um feelin dat. Thumb up. Dope Hook. Add doubles to some of your hooks on future Hits dat you drop. On Ice E/ Certified IIIOG

(1 year ago)

not bad for a 1st effort. i've been rappin for 20 years! my constructive criticism is for you to use the deeper barrel tone part of your voice! LET THEM WHACK CATS KNOW WHAT TIME IT IS! DELIVERY DELIVERY DELIVERY!

(1 year ago)

whats good fam good work 4 1st go around keep doin u heres 302

(1 year ago)

you not bad. u just gotta work on ya breath control

(1 year ago)

thats hot keep striven for your dreams.

(1 year ago)

it's good for some one that says that they have not found their voice! keep hip hop movin forward! hip hop 4 life!

(1 year ago)

Thanks for the add. Feel free to swing by and check out my 100k track " A Black Mans Anthem". Let me know what cha think.

(1 year ago)

Alright I fell u...

(1 year ago)

I'll weigh in for #296. Check me out and leave a comment. PEace.

(1 year ago)

Returning the vote, homeboy. Ill shit. #295

(1 year ago)

YOU GOT MY VOTE DUDE.... NICE LYRICS & ALL. KEEP DOIN YOUR THING. I SEE U! 293

(1 year ago)

Annunciation and delivery are the most important. Your word choice is ill plus you ride the track like you sittin passenger seat. It would also benefit to memorize instead of reading off the paper. You on yo way.

(1 year ago)

Dope!! I luv the lyrically inclined...thx for the feedback earlier. Shot u a vote.. and no..not because you voted for us...really

(1 year ago)

i like that metaphors and similes were on point and so was the chorus gave you a vote

(1 year ago)

vote #283. Flow is clean

(1 year ago)

T.dot stand up!!!!! got my vote send me on back

(1 year ago)

Yo I'm givin' u my vote and DA BIGGEST BIG UP!!! 4 doin' ya part 2 keep hip-hop alive!! "LET NO MAN DESPISE THE YOUTH, BUT LET HIM BE AN EXAMPLE UNTO HIM"!!!!!!!

(1 year ago)

Its cool but your squeezing to much words in your bars...your not giving yourself much room to breate...your words are hard to hear when you spit and you don't sound like you believe every word you say...Enounciate better and you'll win the crowd. I been doing this longer than some that has been alive so I have learned thru the years by experience so don't take my constructive critcism personally...its for your benefit. Keep perfecting your craft and remeber that iron sharpens iron...1

(1 year ago)

Late entry. Stop by and check me out. Let me know what you think.

(1 year ago)

its ight man but keep it more clear and it would sound a better if it had better production but tha lyrics are ight but i dont feel it you need a lil more for thiss try remixing it but nice lyrics man keep it up

(1 year ago)

Overall, it's good, especially for only rappin a short time. I def hear your skills and potential. As an amateur of music(lol), I might suggest working on the clarity of your vocals and lyrical structure (although I know some of that is just due to the production quality). Keep workin it hard and you will only get better. Thanks for hitting me up.

(1 year ago)

Real recognize real!

(1 year ago)

Like my homie said Dogg! Its tight you just need to say it like you mean it man. Peace until wars... Ak

(1 year ago)

sounds good but the voice needs to be thicker.. a more full sound.

(1 year ago)

keep up the work homie, the only way you'll get better is to keep doing wht you do if you really love music like that.

(1 year ago)

yea it sounds good. but mabye for the future through in some like one double up to thickin up the voice, at least that what i think but otherwise the lyrics are there man. God bless and stay up

(1 year ago)

Yeah.. Fam.. Just showed my luv.. My thumbs up cus ur song is Dope too.. U can share my songs on http://www.ourstage.com/fa nclub/hymendos or better still download it from http://www.stereofame.com/ hymen_dos pass it on hommie, its all for d luv... U can also check out our official webpage although we still working on it.. www.boyblacentinc.com ..Best of luck and success in ur endeavours..

(1 year ago)

Not Bad, especially for a first record. Flow will get better with recording. Keep it up.

(1 year ago)

Stay Focused...you have some good punchlines. Embrace where you are from.

(1 year ago)

mon vote #265 return the love ,jah bless you.big up

(1 year ago)

what up bro, here's a vote, nice flow for sure, check my shit out and let me know if you dig it - buck reckless

(1 year ago)

U a real nice when it comez 2 lyrically of course but u need to spit wit a lil more swagg to ya self. I KNOW IF U SPIT WIT A LIL HARD U KNOW U DA SHYT SO I AIN'T GOTTA TELL U DAT. But r u like 16? Not saying anything bad to u i hope cuz das is where my comment is coming from.

(1 year ago)

what up fam that album cover is sick... did u draw that? love ur creativity... stay up..

(1 year ago)

Yeah no probs dawg, for rhymin' only 2 years this is pretty good.

(1 year ago)

Yeah this joint was coo', you know how to deliver. Sounds like you had some problems pronouncing certain words. Especially the part where you starting flipping a lot of words. But you got a vote. Check my shit.

(1 year ago)

254 fromme ya mean

(1 year ago)

Thank you for the great feedback. It really meant a lot. I threw a vote your way. Best of luck bro! Merc

(1 year ago)

Yep Yep...sounding pretty good...you have great potential. Keep ur head to da sky and keep grindin. Much love. Vote # 943

(1 year ago)

You got my vote and you got a madd flow, your voice still sounds very young so you have a chance to really be great. All around man shits tight.

(1 year ago)

You got a lot of heart, You could have pernounced your words more clear. & never sit on your music unless it mixed and mastered. ~RETURN THE VOTE~~Welcome To The Jungle~RETURN THE VOTE~ T-Royal Ft. Too Short :Welcome to Oakland California

(1 year ago)

much love on the feedback and the vote man...i freestyle all my hooks so whatever comes out i roll with...you have some good potential here...keep grinding homie you got my vote...peace

(1 year ago)

you got my vote!good look on being original.

(1 year ago)

Pretty good...you've got a good base to work off of, so I see potential in you....it takes guts just to put yourself out there, and for this to be your first joint (with no proper editing) I think you'll be aight if you keep grindin...best of luck homie

(1 year ago)

Not bad, not bad at all. Only critisism would be u need to spit the words a lil clearer, but for ur first recording it was sick. Keep it up!

(1 year ago)

you on the right track my dude keep it comin...

(1 year ago)

#236 good shit fam you got our vote.One

(1 year ago)

Do Yo Thang, I Voted 4ya2 ! Stay Strong...

(1 year ago)

I voted for you because you have your own style. But work on speaking more clearly on your verse.

(1 year ago)

Good job man. Can't critique u on anything because YOU have to find your own style. Don' let anyone tell you HOW to rap, do u fam. B E z

(1 year ago)

Yeah, I think it was a pretty good flow, to say your booth time was cut, with no effects, and it's your first track ! Speed up da flow a lil, and you will be spittin harder, for your next tracks...Good azz job, though...Keep your head up !

(1 year ago)

ayo u nice but u shud work on ya flow...but dnt try 2 fit all ya wordz in 1 bar 2 iight...dnt get me rong diz track iz nice but go harder iight...hit me bakk cuz im in diz shit 2 iight 1

(1 year ago)

If this is your 1st Recorded Track your off to a good start stick wit it, and stay focused and you'll make it

(1 year ago)

Nice homie keep doin harshz

(1 year ago)

you got my vote and support stay up fam!

(1 year ago)

Your doing your thing bro. Keep it rolling.

(1 year ago)

this was pretty good mayne...i was diggin ya flow, lyrics were tight, i think if you had more time to work with it, this coulda been a lot better, you could've done more to make the hook stand out as far as hype it up a little, and like you mentioned going back and spittin some of ya bars clearer, i heard a few slurs here and there...but overall not bad at all...stay at it mayne you got mad potential... Pc, Syt

(1 year ago)

SOUND GOOD HOMIE...STAY UP AND STAY BLESSED

(1 year ago)

Yo if this is ur 1st joint can't wait 2 hear what u sound like once u get more experoence behind the mic ill drop sun keep doin ya thing!

(1 year ago)

man you know lyrics dont ya

(1 year ago)

just showing the love !

(1 year ago)

206...for ya 1st joint ever

(1 year ago)

you doin alright my man don't worry bout what people think do what works for you first then when you comfortable appeal to the crowd.

(1 year ago)

I feel ya dude. I've only recorded one song myself. You got my vote, for ya first time in the booth, that was pretty damn good.

(1 year ago)

it sounds like you're trying too hard to have a deep voice in the intro, however you got my vote because you still drop knowledge. not just street knowledge, ACTUAL knowledge.

(1 year ago)

very good to be your first recording but u have to work on your timing.keep it up!!!!!!! FACE

(1 year ago)

KEEP IT MOVIN MA DUDE. U GONNA GET THERE

(1 year ago)

it'z str8

(1 year ago)

I LIKE UR VOICE, UR DELIVERY IS GOOD, U'LL GET BETTER WITH TIME.THIS IS REALLY GOOD FOR UR FIRST TIME, U PICKED THE RIGHT BEAT FOR UR VOICE. ONLY THING I WOULD SAY THAT U NEED TO CHANGE IS USE LESS WORDS IN UR SENTENCES SO WE CAN UNDERSTAND WHAT UR SAYIN....OTHER THAN THAT GOOOOOOOOOD JOB!!!!!! STAY ON UR GRIZZLY!!!!!!!PEACE....

(1 year ago)

#194 dis iz hot fo ur first joint keep working on ur craft

(1 year ago)

Koo Maing...NEED To get u some REAL STUDIO TIME..Stay on ur GRIND..WEST COAST...10k..RECORDS

(1 year ago)

Now thats what I'm Talking about here

(1 year ago)

YO BOY ESQUIZIT U GOT MY VOTE

(1 year ago)

Not bad considering ur shitty booth consequences, well at least from the 1 minute of i heard. Got a vote from me. PEACE!!

(1 year ago)

NICE BABY! YOU GOT MY VOTE. BE LOOKIN OUT FO ME IN THE NEXT 3 WEEKS IN THE BATTLE SO YOU CAN CHECK ME OUT.- SCAR $$!@H

(1 year ago)

yea man u got a vote styll... lyrically it was nice nah mean... holla

(1 year ago)

Yo, keep doing your thang dawg. I hit you with vote # 185.

(1 year ago)

Nice track, Sick for 1st track. Stay up dawg.

(1 year ago)

I told u bruh. Its about more than just spittin on a mic. You gotta be able to make a SONG. We make good music. Good lookin on the vote. I voted for u already. 100

(1 year ago)

Dat track waz hot keep doin yo thang.

(1 year ago)

nice track fam stay on the grind

(1 year ago)

A HarshZ, i'm feelin' you lyrically. Come harder though. More feelin'. More aggression. Keep spittin, homie. I liked the lyrics didn't FEEl your flow. You on the right track though. I could take your lyrics and rip that track, using emphasis and de-emphasis, if you feel where I'm comin' from.

(1 year ago)

yo man that weant hard

(1 year ago)

KEEP IT UP,IT PRETTY COO,KEEP AT IT,ALMOST THERE.

(1 year ago)

YEAH SON!!!!! feeling this for real you got my vote!! If you were able to block this out i could be much cleaner!!! SERIOUSLY IMPRESSIVE that you did this all in one go!!!! NUTS!!!

(1 year ago)

Dude you got flow and style but the thing i would say is pronunciate a lil better on the next track. It doesnt always have to be about doubles to make it clearer but you get my vote and my respect for doing it in one take.

(1 year ago)

Dope...Keep that shit moving..

(1 year ago)

drop more hotline than 1 800...like the i go off the scale line too...no i aint a maple leaf but i may believe...hot wordplay bru...no critic here man...good sht

(1 year ago)

Nice job for first time. Keep working, get more studio time, find your voice, and you are gonna be alright. Maybe put a little more aggressiveness in your voice, but like you said, you need more chances to work the track in the booth. /Voted

(1 year ago)

not bad t'all. keep it up.

(1 year ago)

shits not bad at all considerin this is the 1st joint u eva recorded...aside from the obvious things u stated such as doubles n stuff like that, all i would say is just work ur flow a lil bit, maybe sum parts u shouldve punched in, but that all comes wit time homie, keep doin ur thing...1

(1 year ago)

so check the #165 cauz i'm feelin it, peace

(1 year ago)

#164 Cant wait to hear your stuff all clear We both share the same values. SKILLS!SKILLS!SKILLS!

(1 year ago)

Cool Spitz...Vote 160 Playa keep hustlin.

(1 year ago)

Hot track homie I got you

(1 year ago)

u GOT MY VOTE BRUH KICK UP THE GOOD WORK MAN AND STAY UP

(1 year ago)

Tight for a rookie!

(1 year ago)

keep up the good work fam

(1 year ago)

got my vote on this one son

(1 year ago)

droppin vote #152 homie... good shit right here! return the favor on my 100K track 'Watch Me Shine'! BO

(1 year ago)

GOOD TRACK!

(1 year ago)

nice

(1 year ago)

Vote # 149 well deserved much love & respect. Continue to do you & always speak your mind..We appreciate the vote and comment Pearl Camp Justalyricist

(1 year ago)

HIP/HOP much love...skills is nice SUN! I see u shin'n..lyrics are tight..flow is nice..take ya time on some of ya flow..u got it man..peace

(1 year ago)

Whats up Harshz? Thanks for the vote and critique, I know that copy is f..ked up. I just wanted to messure it's success either way I got 2 more tracks left to murk... The fix I can relate to the concept for sure..I like how you attacked the beat. however not to sound like a broken record it was a little difficult to hear you, don't know if it's the accent or your rhyming style. But for your first track not bad... you showed me love I give love back vote #148

(1 year ago)

GOOD SHIT MY NIG,,,TRAE-G.

(1 year ago)

Oh yeah... In your track I heard you mention that you were from Toronto. Do you know Kenny Vance? I know him. Peace.

(1 year ago)

You politely asked me to give feedback/constructive criticism so I will kindly offer. Overall, I liked the song. In particular I liked how you and how you ride the beat with a steady flow. My head was bobbing for most of the track. In your description you expressed a concern about your chorus and implied that your chorus may not be catchy. I would have to disagree with that by saying that I DO think your chorus IS catchy! It is simple and rhythmic (at least the first half of the chorus)making it easy to for the listener to immediately be able to sing along. I have two main criticisms and a third possible criticism. The first is HarshZ articulation of his words while he is rapping. One valuable lesson that I learned in 1998 is that one of the things that makes a great emcee is being able to clearly articulate your words. I actually listened to the song three times and seemed more like I "heard" the song rather than being able to "listen" to the song. The flow is somewhat entrancing and cpmbined with the difficulty of understanding every word clearly the listener is forced to focus more on the flow and "sound" of the song as a whole rather than to what HarshZ is actually saying. My recommendation would be to practice articulating your words more to make it easier for the listener to concentrate on your content. My second criticism is production, or lack thereof. The most important thing about laying down tracks is PRESENTATION. I know that you are aware that you didn't record any doubles or anything, but I think this was a mistake. Try to make everything sound the best you can! Adding doubles and maybe some ad libs would certainly have added more depth and life to the track. I also know that you said this is your first recording ever, but you also said you are aware that you did not ad doubles or anything and I question this. This is a big competition being held but you did not put your best foot forward even though the stakes are high. This goes back to what I said about Presentation being so important. As more and more people hear your music in the future you want to make sure that you make a good first impression!! Music is one of those things that a person knows immediately whether they like a song or not so make sure that it counts when you make it! My third criticism is in regards to the structuring of the song. The entire song was 4:14 which is longer than the average song (approx 3:30)and felt like it. The verses seemed very long and wouldn't be hurt by being shortened a little bit. As I said before I liked the song and if I was to rate it on a scale of 1-10 I would give it a 7. Better articulation along with some simple extra added layers and production could have made the song at least an 8.5. I hope that my feedback has been helpful. Good luck! Pros: Nice steady flow that rides the beat, Catchy hook Cons: Many words are not articulated, Song could be structured better, Lacks production

(1 year ago)

HAD TO GET U BACK HOMIE! JUST FOR THAT LIL WAYNE COMMENT, HA HA! (PEACE)...ONE!...."ARTIST ONE"

(1 year ago)

145 on me fam keep grindin

(1 year ago)

keep doin your thing homie

(1 year ago)

ya mang had u allready but we right in the runnin for dis youll be to the top soon cee u there glad u like the animals

(1 year ago)

H.Z. you know what it is man im behind you all the way. guys can talk all they want, fact is you doin it and at least making a big effort not even gonna lie...the songs live but break it down dont dumb it down

(1 year ago)

vote# 141.couple of tips hommie. breath whenever u can 2 ride the beat better.i used to do the same shit cuz i was saying shit on the paper in my head & not out loud as i wrote causing me to cram 2 many words in every bar... i almost didnt catch the stair master line either which was hot.remember punches need to be more pronounced than every other line.good luck & keep spittin'.ur on 2 something...

(1 year ago)

check out my track let me now wat u think only vote if ur down with it

(1 year ago)

for a relative "rookie" haha nah joking...on the real though youre not sounding like youre new to it...i take it youve been around dope emcees, or at least good at listening to quality hip hop and learning from it... when you went into quick spitting on your second verse...even out your breathing just a little more, your intake was giving you a slight pause...otherwise you were coming off real sick with it on that good shit, keep elevating...dont let yourself plateau, thats when hip hop continues to die, when cats feel theyre at the best they can get

(1 year ago)

SOUNDS GOOD

(1 year ago)

sounds good. keep it coming.

(1 year ago)

Stoppin off ta throw a vote atchya and show sum luv! ; ) Have a great day!

(1 year ago)

ya did ya thing man all I can tell ya is to work on ya delivery and flow then you'll be straight.Keep doin you playa

(1 year ago)

GoOD ShiT

(1 year ago)

Appreciate the support you have my vote too ..Arcade

(1 year ago)

yeah..vote 128 comin' up!

(1 year ago)

#2 - ROCK ON MY FRIEND ! (14 days ago)

(1 year ago)

good lookin for the vote. checked out your track and you got some good lyrics, just need a lil work on the delivery. Wawta

(1 year ago)

nice track homie, you got my vote, check out my track called 'Man Please' and return the love hommie

(1 year ago)

Nice. #125 dog. Holla back at me!

(1 year ago)

Vote #124

(1 year ago)

Thanks for the Comment. Nice track and lyrics.

(1 year ago)

Got my vote man...great beat choice...lyrical skills are top notch too... Peep my song if you get the chance...

(1 year ago)

yo, its dope. you got skills

(1 year ago)

GOT MY DOPE...STAY UP CANADA!!! check your inbox

(1 year ago)

WHATS HOOD WIT IT JO VEZY SLIDEN TREW

(1 year ago)

113 my vote ..tha skills iz wicked..keep doing ur thang fam..thks for tha support. TBBLAZZIN

(1 year ago)

Damn this is Bangin!! got my vote 4 sure

(1 year ago)

Tight. Keep doin' what you do joe.

(1 year ago)

haha thats some tight shyt

(1 year ago)

vote #104 nice shyt ..check minesz out too. iight mane be eazy!!

(1 year ago)

this is hot u get my vote return the fav

(1 year ago)

u rite half dat cachy stuff b kinda sucky 2

(1 year ago)

# 9 2 harsh z runz tingggzzzz haha. finally got ur vote peaceeeeeeee

(1 year ago)

not bad, jus' keep spittin' man. -PMP-

(1 year ago)

Whuddup HarshZ you got a koo flow #90 check ya boy's flow out tho, and holla bac -Bigg Mike

(1 year ago)

Yeahh Wezley comes thru with vote no. 89 :D Holla @ ya wite boy Wezley Taylor

(1 year ago)

ya voice is unique, flows good, presence is decent dogg, good work....peep mines too homie and drop a vote if ya feelin it

(1 year ago)

thnx 4 da support here's ya vote good lookin stay up

(1 year ago)

OKAY CANADA....NEXT TIME LET THAT ANGRY FLOW OUT I HEAR YAH MAN....AND LI WAYNE IZZ REALLY AINT THE BEST TELL EM HARSZ...KEEP THE FLOWS CUMMING I LIKE YOUR ENERGY SO THIZZ MAKES 82 AND COUNTING PLAYA DO YAH THANG

(1 year ago)

Keep it Bangin Thanx for the inspiration to get up Peace Sneake1

(1 year ago)

vote 79! 4 real homie, we gotta get that high quality software haha still good though, take it easy man!

(1 year ago)

Nice OneMy DUDe!

(1 year ago)

What's good? Nice track yo....I'm definitely feeling your lyrics.

(1 year ago)

nujber 74! way to attack the beat!!!!

(1 year ago)

hot track I like the flow good job got my vote

(1 year ago)

Damn dog, you riped this beat. I didnt know you had skillz like this. This track should be #1. When it comes down to lyrical flows, you got it. I need to step my game up! Good shit!

(1 year ago)

wsup homie my bad about the long awaited vote.. i got u...thanks for the support!

(1 year ago)

GOOD JOB BRUH,....REAL HIP-HOP!!!! NICE WAY TO RIDE THE BEAT.

(1 year ago)

good job babes :)

(1 year ago)

Hey!! That was fantastic! You are so talented! :) I think I must have listened to it about a million times!! hahaha Great work! Keep it up!

(1 year ago)

DO YA THANG FAM...#59

(1 year ago)

Keep doing your thing Fam

(1 year ago)

Good Spit That's that Hip Hop Shit Bra Bra.

(1 year ago)

#56 check out my two tracks and return the favor

(1 year ago)

THATS TIGHT HHHHEEEEEEERRREEESSS VOTE 53

(1 year ago)

you got a lotta sick lyrics bro...i know you said you didnt get to edit or polish it up...you should have...you gotta remember, this is a battle against all other MCs out here on ursession and shit has gotta be more than lyrics sad to say...its a total package that's gonna win this...mad love tho my dude keep doin ur thing...droppin mine soon

(1 year ago)

I really like your sound... You got my vote and support

(1 year ago)

#51 Showing the love! Keep hit the streets! One

(1 year ago)

I LIKE THAT I USED THE SAME BEAT AND I'M A PUT UP THE SONG SOON SO YEAH SICK SHIT MAD RESPECT..FROM THAT SICKSIDE ARMY...MC.ELIXER..

(1 year ago)

i got u

(1 year ago)

aiight go in homie good shit...

(1 year ago)

im feelin ya words u got my vote hold in down 4 ya state, hood, watever u can improve tho but hey we only get better

(1 year ago)

thanks for the support!!! im feelin the track!!!! we should collab on some T DOt SHit!!!! u got my vote!!!!

(1 year ago)

feelin ya song yo good stuff

(1 year ago)

u got my vote. handle ya biz duke!

(1 year ago)

you got it brother

(1 year ago)

yeyeye bigups to harshz killin shit wit da lyrics I LUV THIS SHIT

(1 year ago)

harsh Z! do wut do sonnn yu got my vote stilll. Cypha BLOCK

(1 year ago)

ur def right...this is to show talent...raw...or refined.polished...this is fly like the zipper...yeh u right...way to showcase bru

(1 year ago)

tight werk. heres a vote. get@me on my 100k shit in return. if you feel meta4's, hit me witta vote.peace

(1 year ago)

Kee attackenem like that there mang! count me number two three. come hitya boy back and good luck and success....uno Ignite

(1 year ago)

# 22 for ya my Pimp. Fire from the T-Dot i'm feelin ya gee. come check out my 100k cut and return the luv. Keep ballin and doin what u do. Peace, Khanflict

(1 year ago)

nice ma dude! this is ill as fuck! ma bad on the lack of voting back, been SOOOPER busy yo, wit a full length and sum family issues if ya dig? but this sick yo message legit as fuck and right on through wit dat real ass spit mayne!

(1 year ago)

good sheet!!! Holla!!

(1 year ago)

Sick track! Cypha Block! Keep it up

(1 year ago)

i hit u wit a vote.. #15 coming from me.. Come return the love on mines. Keep doing what you do..

(1 year ago)

haha this is actualy really good, n i HATE rap

(1 year ago)

i got you on a vote check me out vote for the battle song if you like it

(1 year ago)

yes harsh sounds fuckin liive bro keep doin wutchu doezzz

(1 year ago)

#8 baby...got you...keep floin...keep push my jam winnin to the top...k..f...

(1 year ago)

yes! sick rhymes man, i hope you win this dude

(1 year ago)

bout time boss! shit man i knew you could write but shit... the flow was crazy. drop a mixtape soon. Rep the CB! GC

(1 year ago)

DOPE!... i like this track brother; the delivery is smooth as hell.. you ever down to swing by here and get some collabo's done? Speciez

(1 year ago)

#2 - ROCK ON MY FRIEND !

(1 year ago)

this some cool shit man... here's a 1st vote... thats whats up... peep my joint and return the favor... One

(1 year ago)