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This is my submission to the 100K Battle. It is my very first fully recorded track and although I waited almost 2 months to put it out, I didn't get to add effects, record doubles, or even re-record parts to make them clearer because of my booth session getting cut off unexpectedly early. It was practically recorded in one shot! Before anyone complains bout the voice or delivery, know that I've only been rappin for almost 2 years..... technically not even that.... so I haven't exactly found my voice yet. And to anyone who complains bout the chorus, this contest was made to showcase SKILLS and TALENT, not who can make a catchier song. So enjoy, vote if ya like it, and leave a comment. And on that note, I'm out.... what happened to peace? PEACEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
COMMENTS 269 COMMENTS



YOOOOO this track is dope as hell man, im feelin this track man keep up the GREAT work. ~0nE~

(3 days ago)

Fosho!

(5 days ago)

ANUTHA VOTE HOMIE. SHOW SUM LUV BACK

(8 days ago)

You Got another 1 rite here. Keep it pushin. Look out for ya Boy and check me out. I'm a 100K contender but I'm a late entrie so I could really use the help. My track go I already know you gone like it. ...SONG. BALL OUT ...BEAT. EVEDINCE 1 ...KING-JAYDA

(8 days ago)

wat up man im 17 years old i just joined the 100k battle man ITS A HITT 2 da rick rock beat man u wud defintly luv dis track man no lies its a bit late i can still win dis competition drop me a vote if ur feelin it give sum gud advice if deres anyway i can improve n drop me a comment man thx

(8 days ago)

You Got another 1 rite here. Keep it pushin. Look out for ya Boy and check me out. I'm a 100K contender but I'm a late entrie so I could really use the help. My track go I already know you gone like it.

(8 days ago)

thats whats up da c.r.e.w

(11 days ago)

good shit youngin! just keep workin at it and it will all come together. what you put in determines what you get out. keep grindin. if you get a minute....check me out.

(15 days ago)

pretty nice for your first recording...got my vote hit me bak

(16 days ago)

damm!!! BraH u got MaDD FloWs I'm diggin that Beat Nice Work q-_-p

(17 days ago)

Im sorry but this is nowhere near "straight crack" In fact its the complete opposite. Your flow needs maaaajor help. Rappin aint for everybody and its definitely not for you. Im not trying to sound harsh but track is horrible. This just my opinion so dont let it stray you at all. Keep chasing your dream no matter what.

(17 days ago)

Ay bro u did good ya first time out. Like u said theres alot of work but u got homie. Keep doing u!

(18 days ago)

369's on Me. Like your Chinese Communism quote. I waited forty seconds because it's all about timing? I could of went "check one two uh uh check one two." Anyway, keep on working. It's not all fun and games. CANADA T.O represent. PEACE DASANE

(18 days ago)

I got u.. #366 -GM holla atcho boy

(21 days ago)

#365. Stay up

(21 days ago)

And dats wuts up.

(21 days ago)

Yeah i feel it

(21 days ago)

!!!!NICE MAN !!!!

(21 days ago)

nah im not messin wit the forums no more im focusing on the prize...

(22 days ago)

yea man im on the grind

(22 days ago)

realli feelin this!!!!! luv dat beat,FIRST RECORDED TRACK???? COULDA FOOLED ME!!!! only suggestion is be a lil mo' aggressive feel me? be on the look out fo ma shit,holla

(22 days ago)

I'll vote for you but your flow needs alot of work...keep doing ya thang!

(22 days ago)

not bad keep on keepin on

(23 days ago)

Damnn, yu iszz gd! lolsz ;)

(23 days ago)

Keep on your grind homie, and good things will come.... Hip Hop Love... Peace

(23 days ago)

i def voted...good lookin famo...keep doin the damn thing!

(23 days ago)

it s good if I can permit to give my opinion just a things put more effects melody in your flow more effects in your voice it s good for one shot to be continued kiss mx

(23 days ago)

Tight track homie. Keep it popping like Rice Crispies.

(23 days ago)

got ya bak ya digg!! #350 Check My Global Stats Nu MixTape Street Credibility We Want In Vol.1 Get @ Me www.myspace.com/sneake1mc Peace Sneake1

(23 days ago)

Dats Da Shit

(23 days ago)

I'm ur #348

(23 days ago)

Aight you doing it! 347

(23 days ago)

346. keep it lit

(23 days ago)

Yo homie vote numero 345 good shit thanks for tha love homie im goin all tha way tryin to catch up ima late entry hah buts its all good thanks for that ballohallic hit to homie keep tha support and keep it up real lyrical

(23 days ago)

Good stuff homie. Keep it up.

(24 days ago)

Keep raping and expressing yourself. I'll be hitting you up when I put out my new tracks. One.

(24 days ago)

#341 on us homie, good lookin out on the props son, keep doin it!!!!

(24 days ago)

Ay thats what good homie, Stay hongry and go get it, it damn sho aint gonna come to you- take every opportunity to get better. Stay up bro -be easy

(24 days ago)

BIG up Toronto... Keep doin ur thing homie my 100k's soon to come

(24 days ago)

This is classic!!!!

(25 days ago)

I voted 4 ya man check out my track for the 100k battle and let me know what u think. if you like it vote!

(25 days ago)

yezzzirrr

(25 days ago)

nice....

(25 days ago)

just voted. good luck

(28 days ago)

YO I AM FEELIN UR IISH.... YOU'VE ALREADY GOT MY VOTE EARLIER, THANKS FOR THE LOVE.... PEACE!!!!

(28 days ago)

good shot bro..keep bringin it. you def.got mine. peace. LW

(28 days ago)

good job you have my vote

(28 days ago)

You know if there's another Canadian Cat on here repping Hip Hop I gotta show love! Ferocious lyrics son! T-Dot yo!

(28 days ago)

this is dope. good for ur first song. pay no mind to haters, ive only been rappin for a year and i know exactly wat these ppl are jealous of... talent! hahaha got my vote

(28 days ago)

Yeah, I already voted 4 dis joint my dude!! Gud shit dats y I hollared atcha!!!

(28 days ago)

Yeah it has a good flow Vote#323 Check out my shit Baywatch and leave a comment and vote 4 me

(28 days ago)

Thanks for the love bruh stay at they neck

(28 days ago)

KEEP DOIN UR THING FUCK WHAT NE SAYS DO UR MUSIC 4 UR SELF DOG CHECK OUT MY SONG IVE BEEN RAPPIN 4 LIKE 12YEARS N MY FIRST CD IS ABOUT 2 COME OUT NEXT MONTH JUST DO UR THING I COULD USE THE VOTE

(28 days ago)

i'm feeling it for sure... keep doing what your doing

(28 days ago)

You've got something there...keep working hard to find your voice and keep writing/recording! And, most important, keep putting stuff up on Ursession to get feedback!

(29 days ago)

Dropped a vote,keep doin ya thang

(29 days ago)

Say i like where you goin at with that keep the tracks comin

(29 days ago)

I like it voted for ya

(29 days ago)

You show a lot of heart. Keep working on perfecting your craft. Congrats on your first track!

(29 days ago)

ok u put in work homie...dope

(30 days ago)

sounds good...Blessings LK

(30 days ago)

315 FOLKZ HOLLA BACK GOOD SHIT

(30 days ago)

It's koo. I think you should pronounce your words a little better but your energy and personality is there!

(1 month ago)

HarshZ, what up brother? I like it, wordplay n syllable phrasing is dope, I can't wait to hear more, cause you flow works nice, I felt at a couple of times your breathing left a few lines catching slightly. Coming from an Ozzies point of view, If i played this in my car or to the boys they'd rate it, Keep it coming fly kat, you def got skills brewing in you. Peace

(1 month ago)

nice beats u def got my vote

(1 month ago)

i kinda like it and i think once u find what your message really is then you'll find success..and im glad your're not trying to make a catchy song it shows u have heart.. good luck! {Isreal}

(1 month ago)

its dope homie keep it up sick flow homie

(1 month ago)

ok ok , im feelin tha beat, ur shit sounds on beat, i like ya flow..sounds tight. i also like tha hook,but ya u could add a double ta make it sound betta.. but yea overall its tight..im feelin it.. u should chek out ma tracks that i uploaded here.. im on tha first verse on all tha songs i put up.. tha hottest one in ma opinion is ma Southside track

(1 month ago)

Harshz, Young Hustler is sayin something. Spitin real game. Original is always better that a copy Kat. Um feelin dat. Thumb up. Dope Hook. Add doubles to some of your hooks on future Hits dat you drop. On Ice E/ Certified IIIOG

(1 month ago)

not bad for a 1st effort. i've been rappin for 20 years! my constructive criticism is for you to use the deeper barrel tone part of your voice! LET THEM WHACK CATS KNOW WHAT TIME IT IS! DELIVERY DELIVERY DELIVERY!

(1 month ago)

whats good fam good work 4 1st go around keep doin u heres 302

(1 month ago)

you not bad. u just gotta work on ya breath control

(1 month ago)

thats hot keep striven for your dreams.

(1 month ago)

it's good for some one that says that they have not found their voice! keep hip hop movin forward! hip hop 4 life!

(1 month ago)

Thanks for the add. Feel free to swing by and check out my 100k track " A Black Mans Anthem". Let me know what cha think.

(1 month ago)

Alright I fell u...

(1 month ago)

I'll weigh in for #296. Check me out and leave a comment. PEace.

(1 month ago)

Returning the vote, homeboy. Ill shit. #295

(1 month ago)

YOU GOT MY VOTE DUDE.... NICE LYRICS & ALL. KEEP DOIN YOUR THING. I SEE U! 293

(1 month ago)

Annunciation and delivery are the most important. Your word choice is ill plus you ride the track like you sittin passenger seat. It would also benefit to memorize instead of reading off the paper. You on yo way.

(1 month ago)

Dope!! I luv the lyrically inclined...thx for the feedback earlier. Shot u a vote.. and no..not because you voted for us...really

(1 month ago)

i like that metaphors and similes were on point and so was the chorus gave you a vote

(1 month ago)

another banger another hit on one of my favs real talk you got mad skillz i see you went a little public on em as far as expressing your own emotion and most people dont understand why you wont spit about what others want iam kind of like that i can care less its about the truth thats what you brought even tho word dont have substance you already know knowledge is first lyrical madness 100% well done

(1 month ago)

vote #283. Flow is clean

(1 month ago)

T.dot stand up!!!!! got my vote send me on back

(1 month ago)

Yo I'm givin' u my vote and DA BIGGEST BIG UP!!! 4 doin' ya part 2 keep hip-hop alive!! "LET NO MAN DESPISE THE YOUTH, BUT LET HIM BE AN EXAMPLE UNTO HIM"!!!!!!!

(1 month ago)

Its cool but your squeezing to much words in your bars...your not giving yourself much room to breate...your words are hard to hear when you spit and you don't sound like you believe every word you say...Enounciate better and you'll win the crowd. I been doing this longer than some that has been alive so I have learned thru the years by experience so don't take my constructive critcism personally...its for your benefit. Keep perfecting your craft and remeber that iron sharpens iron...1

(1 month ago)

Late entry. Stop by and check me out. Let me know what you think.

(1 month ago)

its ight man but keep it more clear and it would sound a better if it had better production but tha lyrics are ight but i dont feel it you need a lil more for thiss try remixing it but nice lyrics man keep it up

(1 month ago)

Overall, it's good, especially for only rappin a short time. I def hear your skills and potential. As an amateur of music(lol), I might suggest working on the clarity of your vocals and lyrical structure (although I know some of that is just due to the production quality). Keep workin it hard and you will only get better. Thanks for hitting me up.

(1 month ago)

Real recognize real!

(1 month ago)

Like my homie said Dogg! Its tight you just need to say it like you mean it man. Peace until wars... Ak

(1 month ago)

sounds good but the voice needs to be thicker.. a more full sound.

(1 month ago)

keep up the work homie, the only way you'll get better is to keep doing wht you do if you really love music like that.

(1 month ago)

yea it sounds good. but mabye for the future through in some like one double up to thickin up the voice, at least that what i think but otherwise the lyrics are there man. God bless and stay up

(1 month ago)

Yeah.. Fam.. Just showed my luv.. My thumbs up cus ur song is Dope too.. U can share my songs on http://www.ourstage.com/fa nclub/hymendos or better still download it from http://www.stereofame.com/ hymen_dos pass it on hommie, its all for d luv... U can also check out our official webpage although we still working on it.. www.boyblacentinc.com ..Best of luck and success in ur endeavours..

(1 month ago)

Not Bad, especially for a first record. Flow will get better with recording. Keep it up.

(1 month ago)

Stay Focused...you have some good punchlines. Embrace where you are from.

(1 month ago)

mon vote #265 return the love ,jah bless you.big up

(1 month ago)

what up bro, here's a vote, nice flow for sure, check my shit out and let me know if you dig it - buck reckless

(1 month ago)

U a real nice when it comez 2 lyrically of course but u need to spit wit a lil more swagg to ya self. I KNOW IF U SPIT WIT A LIL HARD U KNOW U DA SHYT SO I AIN'T GOTTA TELL U DAT. But r u like 16? Not saying anything bad to u i hope cuz das is where my comment is coming from.

(1 month ago)

what up fam that album cover is sick... did u draw that? love ur creativity... stay up..

(1 month ago)

Yeah no probs dawg, for rhymin' only 2 years this is pretty good.

(1 month ago)

Yeah this joint was coo', you know how to deliver. Sounds like you had some problems pronouncing certain words. Especially the part where you starting flipping a lot of words. But you got a vote. Check my shit.

(1 month ago)

254 fromme ya mean

(1 month ago)

Thank you for the great feedback. It really meant a lot. I threw a vote your way. Best of luck bro! Merc

(1 month ago)

Yep Yep...sounding pretty good...you have great potential. Keep ur head to da sky and keep grindin. Much love. Vote # 943

(1 month ago)

Vote #251...I voted for you cuz I like your heart and you sound passionate. You need to work on your diction but for a first recording you show promise.

(1 month ago)

You got my vote and you got a madd flow, your voice still sounds very young so you have a chance to really be great. All around man shits tight.

(1 month ago)

You got a lot of heart, You could have pernounced your words more clear. & never sit on your music unless it mixed and mastered. ~RETURN THE VOTE~~Welcome To The Jungle~RETURN THE VOTE~ T-Royal Ft. Too Short :Welcome to Oakland California

(1 month ago)

much love on the feedback and the vote man...i freestyle all my hooks so whatever comes out i roll with...you have some good potential here...keep grinding homie you got my vote...peace

(1 month ago)

you got my vote!good look on being original.

(1 month ago)

i hit you up wit one get bac at me

(1 month ago)

Pretty good...you've got a good base to work off of, so I see potential in you....it takes guts just to put yourself out there, and for this to be your first joint (with no proper editing) I think you'll be aight if you keep grindin...best of luck homie

(1 month ago)

Not bad, not bad at all. Only critisism would be u need to spit the words a lil clearer, but for ur first recording it was sick. Keep it up!

(1 month ago)

you on the right track my dude keep it comin...

(1 month ago)

#236 good shit fam you got our vote.One

(1 month ago)

Do Yo Thang, I Voted 4ya2 ! Stay Strong...

(1 month ago)

I voted for you because you have your own style. But work on speaking more clearly on your verse.

(1 month ago)

Good job man. Can't critique u on anything because YOU have to find your own style. Don' let anyone tell you HOW to rap, do u fam. B E z

(1 month ago)

Yeah, I think it was a pretty good flow, to say your booth time was cut, with no effects, and it's your first track ! Speed up da flow a lil, and you will be spittin harder, for your next tracks...Good azz job, though...Keep your head up !

(1 month ago)

ayo u nice but u shud work on ya flow...but dnt try 2 fit all ya wordz in 1 bar 2 iight...dnt get me rong diz track iz nice but go harder iight...hit me bakk cuz im in diz shit 2 iight 1

(1 month ago)

nice flow crazy!

(1 month ago)

#228 Good job.

(1 month ago)

If this is your 1st Recorded Track your off to a good start stick wit it, and stay focused and you'll make it

(1 month ago)

Nice homie keep doin harshz

(1 month ago)

you got my vote and support stay up fam!

(1 month ago)

Your doing your thing bro. Keep it rolling.

(1 month ago)

this was pretty good mayne...i was diggin ya flow, lyrics were tight, i think if you had more time to work with it, this coulda been a lot better, you could've done more to make the hook stand out as far as hype it up a little, and like you mentioned going back and spittin some of ya bars clearer, i heard a few slurs here and there...but overall not bad at all...stay at it mayne you got mad potential... Pc, Syt

(1 month ago)

SOUND GOOD HOMIE...STAY UP AND STAY BLESSED

(1 month ago)

Yo if this is ur 1st joint can't wait 2 hear what u sound like once u get more experoence behind the mic ill drop sun keep doin ya thing!

(1 month ago)

man you know lyrics dont ya

(1 month ago)

just showing the love !

(1 month ago)

not badd for ya 1st.. keep doin ya thing family

(2 months ago)

206...for ya 1st joint ever

(2 months ago)

you doin alright my man don't worry bout what people think do what works for you first then when you comfortable appeal to the crowd.

(2 months ago)

I feel ya dude. I've only recorded one song myself. You got my vote, for ya first time in the booth, that was pretty damn good.

(2 months ago)

it sounds like you're trying too hard to have a deep voice in the intro, however you got my vote because you still drop knowledge. not just street knowledge, ACTUAL knowledge.

(2 months ago)

very good to be your first recording but u have to work on your timing.keep it up!!!!!!! FACE

(2 months ago)

KEEP IT MOVIN MA DUDE. U GONNA GET THERE

(2 months ago)

it'z str8

(2 months ago)

I LIKE UR VOICE, UR DELIVERY IS GOOD, U'LL GET BETTER WITH TIME.THIS IS REALLY GOOD FOR UR FIRST TIME, U PICKED THE RIGHT BEAT FOR UR VOICE. ONLY THING I WOULD SAY THAT U NEED TO CHANGE IS USE LESS WORDS IN UR SENTENCES SO WE CAN UNDERSTAND WHAT UR SAYIN....OTHER THAN THAT GOOOOOOOOOD JOB!!!!!! STAY ON UR GRIZZLY!!!!!!!PEACE....

(2 months ago)

#194 dis iz hot fo ur first joint keep working on ur craft

(2 months ago)

Koo Maing...NEED To get u some REAL STUDIO TIME..Stay on ur GRIND..WEST COAST...10k..RECORDS

(2 months ago)

Now thats what I'm Talking about here

(2 months ago)

YO BOY ESQUIZIT U GOT MY VOTE

(2 months ago)

Not bad considering ur shitty booth consequences, well at least from the 1 minute of i heard. Got a vote from me. PEACE!!

(2 months ago)

NICE BABY! YOU GOT MY VOTE. BE LOOKIN OUT FO ME IN THE NEXT 3 WEEKS IN THE BATTLE SO YOU CAN CHECK ME OUT.- SCAR $$!@H

(2 months ago)

yea man u got a vote styll... lyrically it was nice nah mean... holla

(2 months ago)

Yo, keep doing your thang dawg. I hit you with vote # 185.

(2 months ago)

Nice track, Sick for 1st track. Stay up dawg.

(2 months ago)

I told u bruh. Its about more than just spittin on a mic. You gotta be able to make a SONG. We make good music. Good lookin on the vote. I voted for u already. 100

(2 months ago)

Dat track waz hot keep doin yo thang.

(2 months ago)

nice track fam stay on the grind

(2 months ago)

A HarshZ, i'm feelin' you lyrically. Come harder though. More feelin'. More aggression. Keep spittin, homie. I liked the lyrics didn't FEEl your flow. You on the right track though. I could take your lyrics and rip that track, using emphasis and de-emphasis, if you feel where I'm comin' from.

(2 months ago)

yo man that weant hard

(2 months ago)

KEEP IT UP,IT PRETTY COO,KEEP AT IT,ALMOST THERE.

(2 months ago)

YEAH SON!!!!! feeling this for real you got my vote!! If you were able to block this out i could be much cleaner!!! SERIOUSLY IMPRESSIVE that you did this all in one go!!!! NUTS!!!

(2 months ago)

Dude you got flow and style but the thing i would say is pronunciate a lil better on the next track. It doesnt always have to be about doubles to make it clearer but you get my vote and my respect for doing it in one take.

(2 months ago)

Dope...Keep that shit moving..

(2 months ago)

drop more hotline than 1 800...like the i go off the scale line too...no i aint a maple leaf but i may believe...hot wordplay bru...no critic here man...good sht

(2 months ago)

Nice job for first time. Keep working, get more studio time, find your voice, and you are gonna be alright. Maybe put a little more aggressiveness in your voice, but like you said, you need more chances to work the track in the booth. /Voted

(2 months ago)

not bad t'all. keep it up.

(2 months ago)

shits not bad at all considerin this is the 1st joint u eva recorded...aside from the obvious things u stated such as doubles n stuff like that, all i would say is just work ur flow a lil bit, maybe sum parts u shouldve punched in, but that all comes wit time homie, keep doin ur thing...1

(2 months ago)

so check the #165 cauz i'm feelin it, peace

(2 months ago)

#164 Cant wait to hear your stuff all clear We both share the same values. SKILLS!SKILLS!SKILLS!

(2 months ago)

Cool Spitz...Vote 160 Playa keep hustlin.

(2 months ago)

Hot track homie I got you

(2 months ago)

u GOT MY VOTE BRUH KICK UP THE GOOD WORK MAN AND STAY UP

(2 months ago)

Tight for a rookie!

(2 months ago)

keep up the good work fam

(2 months ago)

got my vote on this one son

(2 months ago)

droppin vote #152 homie... good shit right here! return the favor on my 100K track 'Watch Me Shine'! BO

(2 months ago)

GOOD TRACK!

(2 months ago)

nice

(2 months ago)

Vote # 149 well deserved much love & respect. Continue to do you & always speak your mind..We appreciate the vote and comment Pearl Camp Justalyricist

(2 months ago)

HIP/HOP much love...skills is nice SUN! I see u shin'n..lyrics are tight..flow is nice..take ya time on some of ya flow..u got it man..peace

(2 months ago)

Whats up Harshz? Thanks for the vote and critique, I know that copy is f..ked up. I just wanted to messure it's success either way I got 2 more tracks left to murk... The fix I can relate to the concept for sure..I like how you attacked the beat. however not to sound like a broken record it was a little difficult to hear you, don't know if it's the accent or your rhyming style. But for your first track not bad... you showed me love I give love back vote #148

(2 months ago)

GOOD SHIT MY NIG,,,TRAE-G.

(2 months ago)

Oh yeah... In your track I heard you mention that you were from Toronto. Do you know Kenny Vance? I know him. Peace.

(2 months ago)

You politely asked me to give feedback/constructive criticism so I will kindly offer. Overall, I liked the song. In particular I liked how you and how you ride the beat with a steady flow. My head was bobbing for most of the track. In your description you expressed a concern about your chorus and implied that your chorus may not be catchy. I would have to disagree with that by saying that I DO think your chorus IS catchy! It is simple and rhythmic (at least the first half of the chorus)making it easy to for the listener to immediately be able to sing along. I have two main criticisms and a third possible criticism. The first is HarshZ articulation of his words while he is rapping. One valuable lesson that I learned in 1998 is that one of the things that makes a great emcee is being able to clearly articulate your words. I actually listened to the song three times and seemed more like I "heard" the song rather than being able to "listen" to the song. The flow is somewhat entrancing and cpmbined with the difficulty of understanding every word clearly the listener is forced to focus more on the flow and "sound" of the song as a whole rather than to what HarshZ is actually saying. My recommendation would be to practice articulating your words more to make it easier for the listener to concentrate on your content. My second criticism is production, or lack thereof. The most important thing about laying down tracks is PRESENTATION. I know that you are aware that you didn't record any doubles or anything, but I think this was a mistake. Try to make everything sound the best you can! Adding doubles and maybe some ad libs would certainly have added more depth and life to the track. I also know that you said this is your first recording ever, but you also said you are aware that you did not ad doubles or anything and I question this. This is a big competition being held but you did not put your best foot forward even though the stakes are high. This goes back to what I said about Presentation being so important. As more and more people hear your music in the future you want to make sure that you make a good first impression!! Music is one of those things that a person knows immediately whether they like a song or not so make sure that it counts when you make it! My third criticism is in regards to the structuring of the song. The entire song was 4:14 which is longer than the average song (approx 3:30)and felt like it. The verses seemed very long and wouldn't be hurt by being shortened a little bit. As I said before I liked the song and if I was to rate it on a scale of 1-10 I would give it a 7. Better articulation along with some simple extra added layers and production could have made the song at least an 8.5. I hope that my feedback has been helpful. Good luck! Pros: Nice steady flow that rides the beat, Catchy hook Cons: Many words are not articulated, Song could be structured better, Lacks production

(2 months ago)

HAD TO GET U BACK HOMIE! JUST FOR THAT LIL WAYNE COMMENT, HA HA! (PEACE)...ONE!...."ARTIST ONE"

(2 months ago)

145 on me fam keep grindin

(2 months ago)

HAHA that shit about Big Pun and Weezy lol shit was nice fam.

(2 months ago)

keep doin your thing homie

(2 months ago)

ya mang had u allready but we right in the runnin for dis youll be to the top soon cee u there glad u like the animals

(2 months ago)

H.Z. you know what it is man im behind you all the way. guys can talk all they want, fact is you doin it and at least making a big effort not even gonna lie...the songs live but break it down dont dumb it down

(2 months ago)

vote# 141.couple of tips hommie. breath whenever u can 2 ride the beat better.i used to do the same shit cuz i was saying shit on the paper in my head & not out loud as i wrote causing me to cram 2 many words in every bar... i almost didnt catch the stair master line either which was hot.remember punches need to be more pronounced than every other line.good luck & keep spittin'.ur on 2 something...

(2 months ago)

check out my track let me now wat u think only vote if ur down with it

(2 months ago)

for a relative "rookie" haha nah joking...on the real though youre not sounding like youre new to it...i take it youve been around dope emcees, or at least good at listening to quality hip hop and learning from it... when you went into quick spitting on your second verse...even out your breathing just a little more, your intake was giving you a slight pause...otherwise you were coming off real sick with it on that good shit, keep elevating...dont let yourself plateau, thats when hip hop continues to die, when cats feel theyre at the best they can get

(2 months ago)

SOUNDS GOOD

(2 months ago)

sounds good. keep it coming.

(2 months ago)

Stoppin off ta throw a vote atchya and show sum luv! ; ) Have a great day!

(2 months ago)

ya did ya thing man all I can tell ya is to work on ya delivery and flow then you'll be straight.Keep doin you playa

(2 months ago)

GoOD ShiT

(2 months ago)

Appreciate the support you have my vote too ..Arcade

(2 months ago)

yeah..vote 128 comin' up!

(2 months ago)

#2 - ROCK ON MY FRIEND ! (14 days ago)

(2 months ago)

Actually bro that was a freestyle thats why the last hook is off by a bar but I appreciate you listenin n givin your feed back but yea there was no practice before that record lol i knew i had 10 hrs scheduled in the booth yesterday and i wanted 2 just try n fuck wit a 100k beat thats the one i picked after hearin the first 30 seconds n i downloaded it brought it to the studio and made it the last record i did 10 hrs into my studio session n never heard it all the way thru so i actually thought under the circumstances it wasnt that bad of a record and all your track theres a cpl of bars where your words are to blended together makes it somewhat hard to hear what you were saying so make sure u annunciate your words clear real talk fam other then that i got a vote for you so hopefully u will return the favor ya digg

(2 months ago)

good lookin for the vote. checked out your track and you got some good lyrics, just need a lil work on the delivery. Wawta

(2 months ago)

nice track homie, you got my vote, check out my track called 'Man Please' and return the love hommie

(2 months ago)

Nice. #125 dog. Holla back at me!

(2 months ago)

Vote #124

(2 months ago)

Thanks for the Comment. Nice track and lyrics.

(2 months ago)

Got my vote man...great beat choice...lyrical skills are top notch too... Peep my song if you get the chance...

(2 months ago)

yo, its dope. you got skills

(2 months ago)

GOT MY DOPE...STAY UP CANADA!!! check your inbox

(2 months ago)

WHATS HOOD WIT IT JO VEZY SLIDEN TREW

(2 months ago)

113 my vote ..tha skills iz wicked..keep doing ur thang fam..thks for tha support. TBBLAZZIN

(2 months ago)

Damn this is Bangin!! got my vote 4 sure

(2 months ago)

Tight. Keep doin' what you do joe.

(2 months ago)

haha thats some tight shyt

(2 months ago)

vote #104 nice shyt ..check minesz out too. iight mane be eazy!!

(2 months ago)

this is hot u get my vote return the fav

(2 months ago)

u rite half dat cachy stuff b kinda sucky 2

(2 months ago)

# 9 2 harsh z runz tingggzzzz haha. finally got ur vote peaceeeeeeee

(2 months ago)

not bad, jus' keep spittin' man. -PMP-

(2 months ago)

Whuddup HarshZ you got a koo flow #90 check ya boy's flow out tho, and holla bac -Bigg Mike

(2 months ago)

Yeahh Wezley comes thru with vote no. 89 :D Holla @ ya wite boy Wezley Taylor

(2 months ago)

ya voice is unique, flows good, presence is decent dogg, good work....peep mines too homie and drop a vote if ya feelin it

(2 months ago)

thnx 4 da support here's ya vote good lookin stay up

(2 months ago)

OKAY CANADA....NEXT TIME LET THAT ANGRY FLOW OUT I HEAR YAH MAN....AND LI WAYNE IZZ REALLY AINT THE BEST TELL EM HARSZ...KEEP THE FLOWS CUMMING I LIKE YOUR ENERGY SO THIZZ MAKES 82 AND COUNTING PLAYA DO YAH THANG

(2 months ago)

Keep it Bangin Thanx for the inspiration to get up Peace Sneake1

(2 months ago)

vote 79! 4 real homie, we gotta get that high quality software haha still good though, take it easy man!

(2 months ago)

Nice OneMy DUDe!

(2 months ago)

What's good? Nice track yo....I'm definitely feeling your lyrics.

(2 months ago)

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